Isabel Allende once said, '' Heart is what drives us and determines
our fate.'' This means that everyone leads themselves , to what will happen in their own future. That every single decision everyone takes leads them to their fate. Will this quote is correct. The reason is because everyone's decisions always have an effect to everyone's life. This can be clearly seen in the book Out Of Nowhere , written by Maria Padian. The way the main character, Tom Bouchard, makes strong decisions, his actions, and just the way he is , develops his fate in this whole story. He goes from having everything and being popular, to making new friends that have nothing. And there everything starts to change.
I like that you put everyone is in charge of their own destiny, or future, I agree with that statement. You had some misspellings, like when you put "will" instead of "well" but that's a common mistake. You didn't use 1st person which is a plus. You had great points for your thesis statement, except your last one could be a bit more specific. Overall a
ReplyDeletegreat intro for your essay.